Today’s prompt was to write a poem that uses a repeating phrase and then goes on to contradict itself.
You call yourself a poem?
Look at you. Your lines are
stubby and you lack
imagery. The reference
you make to the peach
is too soft, too sweet, its
sides mushy and shapeless.
You call yourself a poem?
Take a good long look at
your form. It’s as brittle
as a dead tree. If you ever tried
to hold an idea, your
branches would just sn-ap.
You call yourself a poem?
Where is the beauty? I can
see the cracks, now where is
the light? The words that form
you have been scraped from
underneath a mossy rock.
You call yourself a poem?
Shake yourself down.
Adjust your ideas. Take
this graveyard of broken
phrases and dig it over.
Mosaic the words until
it gives us something
that feels more like truth.