Tag: writing

Day Eight: You Call Yourself A Poem?

Today’s prompt was to write a poem that uses a repeating phrase and then goes on to contradict itself.

You call yourself a poem?

Look at you.  Your lines are

stubby and you lack

imagery.  The reference

you make to the peach

is too soft, too sweet, its

sides mushy and shapeless.

You call yourself a poem?

Take a good long look at

your form.  It’s as brittle

as a dead tree.  If you ever tried

to hold an idea, your

branches would just sn-ap.

You call yourself a poem?

Where is the beauty? I can

see the cracks, now where is

the light? The words that form

you have been scraped from

underneath a mossy rock.

You call yourself a poem?

Shake yourself down.

Adjust your ideas.  Take

this graveyard of broken

phrases and dig it over.

Mosaic the words until

it gives us something

that feels more like truth.

Day 25: Forever Young

Today’s prompt was to write about the experience of live music. I think this will be my last of this year’s NaPo – I’m lacking energy and inspiration. But it’s been good while it lasted!

Somewhere several rows back I’m there, in

black Doc Martins and a blue dress (probably)

my long hair plaited to my waist (definitely).  I’m standing in

mud.  We’re all standing in mud.  I don’t know these

people and they don’t know me but we’re there

to see the man with the hazy brown hair and the

electric guitar.  Bob Dylan.  Glastonbury 1998.

I’m wide eyed and half starved and I had to wade

to get here, and now I’m standing in a dirty dress in a

flooded field surrounded by strangers and

I’ve just watched Nick Cave belt out Do You Love Me? 

We did.                                                                                                       

Now Dylan’s guitar is chopping through

Just Like a Woman.  A dark, muddy sound.

I’m as happy as I’ve ever been.

The rain doesn’t stop but nobody cares. 

The guitar, acoustic now, plinks a rhythm

and Dylan’s voice starts to creak out Masters Of War. 

Later I’ll remember listening to Forever Young in that field

and it’ll become a self-defining moment, my Woodstock.

I was young.  I thought that would last forever.

He never played that song.